Update: Please don't let this be a DNF. I don't know when's the last time I didn't finish a book. Maybe I'm just not in the mood for this right now...but pages and pages covering Meghan's idiotic temper tantrum over Ash doing exactly what Ash TOLD HER he was going to do has me really, really annoyed... >:(
It puts me in a bad mood when stories have consistency errors and grammatical errors right at the beginning. It sends me into editor/writer mode, where I'm analyzing the craft of the story instead of enjoying the story. That's all for now.